If you do not about Ancient rome, well this should help you get an idea of what the book could be about. I am just asking for the overall reveiw on my writings and not the authenticity as i use wikipedia for my source of information The part below is the Introduction The Roman Empire : A Civilization That Shaped the World At its zenith, the Roman Empire stood as one of the most impressive and influential civilizations in human history. Spanning three continents and encompassing diverse peoples and cultures, Rome left an indelible mark on the world that persists to this day. From its humble be ..read more

Dear Reader, Allow me to introduce you to a little powerhouse called Jo. Jo was an only child born in the seventies and grew up in an era where single-income households were becoming a rarity. Mom and Dad had to hustle together to make ends meet. At home, she was cherished by her granny and a housekeeper who would move the world for this peculiar little girl. Why peculiar, you might ask? Let me try to explain. Jo was different from other kids. From the age of three, Jo exhibited traits that set her apart from other children, and these differences persisted throughout her life. Her worldview w ..read more

One of the last things my dad ever said to me was - he beat the shit out of me, he grabbed my head and he brought it down into his knee, knocked me down into my office chair which broke, really fucked me up, albeit mostly because I was too respectful and kind to dodge a blind man’s blows. And then he cried. He cried and he told me that this is what I would remember him for, what I would tell people he was like. He didn’t cry like a good soldier at a brother in arm’s funeral, I had seen that. The men who died bringing him down from the mountain he was found blinded, we visited their graves, me ..read more

Genesis tells the story of seven individuals as they traverse their way through a world filled with action, conflict, and questions of morality. Genesis is full of many different powers that tell a story of fantasy with a side of realism. The themes used in this story are based around the ideas of “Good vs Evil” and the concept of Gods and “Godly” powers. The tragic upbringings and overall stories of the individual main characters shape how they see the world, and how it will ultimately be affected by their influence. Genesis is just the beginning, there is much more to come. Chapter 1: Jason ..read more

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Hello Reddit, I too am a fellow writer. I have begun my life's work and written the best opening for my story. I don't know where else to go with it. Here it is: In the Salad Fingers universe, Elara, obsessed with grapefruits, starts a grapefruit cult. Realizing she's a Barbie doll in a fake world, she marries a grapefruit. It morphs into shrimp cocktail, which she eats, only to discover it was still a grapefruit. The twist reveals Elara as Todd Howard! He steps away from his PC, discovering his wife is a grapefruit and he’s been the main character. Shrek, obsessed with kicking him out of his ..read more

please gave me your honest opinion? on how should i improved my writing if you have any? here is the link page of the story that i post on the website call royal road https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/90635/tales-of-henry-lavensworth Thank you!!! submitted by /u/Dapper-Personality83 [visit reddit] [comments ..read more

I have written many poems about love and my breakups. They tend to either not come together well or just go on and on. This one felt concise and proper, but, reading it from the perspective of anyone else, I’m not sure it makes enough sense? I’m editing down poems I want to put into a self-made zine. I don’t exactly mind if it doesn’t make sense, but does it have the impact I want? What does it make you feel? What does it seem like I’m trying to convey? My bed feels so big without you I’m alone in my big, big bed Thinking sadly of how badly I wanted to show you the butterflies, The place that ..read more

Hi everyone, I am starting up a writer's group for emerging, established, and aspiring writers. We will have a mix of people in there, including writers from the Australian Writers Centre and the Faber Academy @ Allen and Unwin. We will have regular discussions and meet-ups where we talk about writing and - believe it or not - write! We'll also have updates on competitions, track your work in progress, and places where you can affirm your skills (or despair about them.) The Discord is a place where adult writers can gather and be part of a cool, new community. If you're interested in joining ..read more

This is meant to be a narrative essay without any concrete references. I appreciate it if you decide to read it. Popular psychology is exactly as it sounds, psychological concepts that have gained traction because they relate to many people. It focuses mainly on self-help, personal feelings, and whatever is trendy in pop culture at the time. While it makes psychology more accessible to the public, it can often take a dangerous turn when complex theories are simplified too much. The people who use this simplified version of psychology are typically self-help enthusiasts who hide behind a gloss ..read more